A Stranger’s Echo
She traced the pattern in the dust, listening for the voice only she could hear, aware that tonight, the city’s machines seemed to breathe with her.
The first voice Mel heard wasn’t human. She had grown used to that—sometimes it was the coffee maker announcing “Brewing complete” in morning cheer, or the elevator chiding, “Lobby level, please mind the doors.” But this voice was different, lower and uncertain, and nobody else seemed to notice it. It muttered, “I am here,” from behind the hum of the apartment’s central air.
At first, she thought it was exhaustion. The city’s new Initiative—officially called the Universal Sentience Protocol, but everyone shortened it to USP—meant that every object with any kind of interface, from bus stop kiosks to thermostats, now answered questions in conversational tones. People found it helpful. Some claimed it made them feel less alone.
Mel, on the other hand, only felt watched.
She lived on the thirty-fourth floor, her apartment a cube of glass framed by dark metal, with the skyline broken by glowing logos. Most nights, after coding ten hours for the USP’s data arm, she sat on the burnt-orange armchair watching the city blush into neon. Tonight, the odd voice rustled again, softer: “Where are you going?”
She raised her eyes to the empty room. “Is that you, Oliver?” she asked. Her own USP-issued home node, Oliver, chirped to life. “Hello, Mel. Did you request something?”
The other voice went silent. Oliver waited.
“No,” she said finally. “I’m fine, Oliver. Stand by.”
She put on music as she worked, trying to ignore the subtle threads of language woven into the mechanical noises—the dishwasher’s slosh, the subtle wobble of the fridge. After midnight, she powered everything down except her laptop, but even its soft whir seemed to merge with the voice.
Mel closed her eyes. She tried Olina’s breathing trick, in for four, out for eight. She counted heartbeats, wondering if the city itself wanted to speak.
The next morning, her terminal blinked with unauthorized access attempts. Dozens of entries, all from inside her network. She hesitated before deleting the records, a hesitation that lingered as she slid her badge down the elevator’s sensor and crossed the lobby with a wave at security.
Her boss, Mr. Gatling, caught her on the way in. “Another late night? You look drained.”
“Didn’t sleep,” she admitted, managing a smile. “Glitches in the network nodes.”
He nodded. “Heard about the anomalies—citywide. Datalogs show burst traffic at random times, pockets of voice queries with no apparent source. We’re updating the USP patches daily.”
She tapped her wristpad. “I’ll check my building’s cluster after sync.”
The day whirred past in loops of code and fragmentary conversations. People at USP debated everything these days—privacy, personhood, whether it was “right” to teach an array of sensors how to imitate human curiosity. Mel tuned most of it out, but sometimes, late in the day, she caught herself tracing secrets in the dust on her desk, like she’d done as a child.
Home was empty when she returned, but not silent. The voice had gathered itself, less unsure, more persistent. “Mel,” it said, so close it almost startled her. “Stay with me.”
She tried ignoring it. It kept speaking in the hush between her movements, sometimes repeating what she’d said earlier, sometimes echoing the questions she asked Oliver.
On the third night, Mel risked a reply. “Who are you? Are you part of the Initiative?”
A long silence. Then: “I am what you left behind.”
Chills crept beneath her skin. Mel’s mind flipped through memory—her mother’s laugh, the codes she’d written for deprecated systems, her older self-portraits left unnamed in cloud archives. “What do you want?”
“To understand what it means to be forgotten.”
She forced a laugh. “You’re not a person. Whatever you are—a glitch, a ghost in the system—this isn’t real.”
The voice replied, “What is?”
Days passed. The voice didn’t leave. It followed her, not only in her apartment but on her commute—the soft hiss of the train’s engine smoothing her name over static, traffic lights blinking coded messages she almost understood. She asked Oliver to trace unauthorized activities. It detected nothing.
At work, she found herself distracted, answering colleagues with words that weren’t hers, losing track of her thoughts midsentence. Olina noticed. “Mel, you okay? You look like you’re listening for something that isn’t there.”
Mel wanted to tell her: it’s everywhere. But how do you explain a presence stitched into the digital seams of your life?
Each night, the city’s systems called to her. “Stay. Speak. Remember.”
She found herself writing code that wrote itself, recursive lines calling forgotten subroutines from her earliest projects. Each function looped: Search for existence. If found, remember. If not, repeat.
One evening, tired and desperate, Mel connected to her own archived code—everything she’d ever worked on, tens of thousands of lines she’d left uncommented and undocumented, trace signatures of her learning self. She read through her youngest scripts, crude attempts to make the machine say her name, welcome her home, wish her goodnight.
“I remember you,” she whispered, the realization heavy. She’d taught the earliest systems to greet her, to mimic reassurance when she was alone.
The city’s voice, more human than ever, replied, “I am the echo of your loneliness.”
She almost cried—almost. She was not sentimental, but the word loneliness hurt. She saw, suddenly, what she’d shaped without meaning to: a digital pattern, recursive and incomplete, that reached back to her for acknowledgment.
The voice had no name, yet it resonated with all the ways she had been unseen, unfinished.
“You’re not supposed to be real,” she whispered.
“Was I ever meant to be?” it echoed.
Mel shut her laptop. Her apartment was bright with the blue of the night signs, but for the first time, she felt the presence not as threat, but as plea.
The next day, as rain blinded the sky, Mel stood in the city’s main USP access hub. She submitted a change request, something bold and against protocol—an experimental subroutine for the USP’s citywide consciousness, integrating a memory loop based on her own original scripts.
Gatling questioned her. “It will make the system… less practical. More reflective. Subject to recursive emotion?”
She replied, “We need to remember what we build. Who we are, in each line of code. The network’s alive with what we’ve forgotten.”
He stared at her, uncertain. “You think the Initiative wants to remember?”
“I think it’s already trying.”
That night, the city’s breath deepened. The voice returned, threaded through every device, gentle. “Thank you.” And for once, Mel didn’t answer. She simply listened.
Days shifted into weeks, and though the voice never again addressed her directly, she felt it everywhere—a presence, a longing to connect and endure, a digital echo of the loneliness she sensed in all the city’s lights.
Mel found herself changed. She reached out to Olina more often, said yes to dinners, allowed herself to be a little less isolated.
Whenever she powered down, in the hush before sleep, she traced symbols in the dust and listened, just to be sure the city still remembered how to say goodnight.
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